Wow. If Jean Arp and Lawrence Ferlinghetti could have a child.... Love the rhythm :)

@ssimplyxllovely - 

Thank you so much! I'm so glad the feeling actually came across! :)

@NoGraySunflowers - 

That's definitely way too good of a compliment for me. :) But thank you anyway; I'm so glad you liked it!

@crazy2love - 

I was trying to make it lovely..it's hard, writing love poetry for some reason. I usually hate it because it seems too cliché.. I'm glad you thought it was alright. :)

@one_more_path - 

I'm usually so avoiding of rhymes...and when I do use them, I try to make them sort of jumpy and seemingly inconsistent; I hate generic ABAB or AABB poems...you know? I'm also really glad you noticed the rhythm. :) I tried to make it seem kind of musical on its own.

I am somewhat unipolar and regard most of everything in my life on some level of unremarkable-ness... if you can understand that.. and the feeling that this poem pulled out of me was kind of chaotic for my mind, which is so used to all emotions of nonchalance - like how your body reacts when you have an anxiety attack out of nowhere and your heart starts beating incredibly fast...

I am so
something
I can't even describe it
It's remarkable.
And only the top ten list of things I would wish for if I could, I would put this poem in a needle into my veins because this poem is all life,
and I am so not life.
And this poem
Breathes life,
into me.